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[征文作品] 【岁末征文活动】【春丽传奇】

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个人感觉情节有点虚弱，不够曲折，春丽的形象不够丰满，如果没有个性的话，她就不叫春丽，也就失去了最大的意义，一开始就上重戏也会导致下文的失色，导致增加情节难度，当然相信楼主的写作能力，定会写出更加精彩的下文
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